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    Dark Comedy/Drama

    I have recently finished the first draft a short film that takes place in the near future when physician assisted suicide is legalized for depression. I am more a director and not a screen writer so I know it could use work If you would like to proof read it for me and give some insights, I...
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    watch Echo | Sci-fi Short Film

    Hey guys just released this little short film. Looking for all honest feedback. This forum has already helped me grow so much in my film making. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VH3uVAMls7g https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VH3uVAMls7g
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    watch Yatana|Sci-fi webseries

    Action comedy just finished the first episode for. The challenge is to try something where I don't have to gather a crew for and just try to make by myself. Future episodes with have more dynamic scenes but the first episode, is mainly setting up the story. Please critique honestly so I can...
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    watch Little short we just finished!

    This forum has helped me grow as a film maker incredibly. So I come again with my latest work for constructive criticism. Be harsh, be kind, but most importantly be honest! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cdvv6c3t3js
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    watch The Angel's Bell

    Hey guys, I got started on this forum a couple months ago, and the tips and feedback from here completely turned my channel around. Our production value is getting so much better. That being said, we have this new short, and I would love to see what you guys think about it...
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    watch Interrogation Scene

    Tried something new with this one. Of all the productions we have done, this is probably my favorite and best. I'm still nowhere near how good I want to be, but at least now I'm seeing progress...lol I usually struggle with soundtrack and finding interesting shots, not to mention the countless...
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    watch Treasure Hunt

    Well, we're definitely getting better, but no where near being able to put what I see in my head into film. Feedback is strongly needed as its the best way to grow, so point out anything you see fit. My particular struggle with this production was the soundtrack. The emotion was missing so...
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    watch Mind Chimes - short

    Ok so learning from past mistakes, and from the advice given on my previous videos...here is my third miniature production. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lKsMS_B_qDg Things that I have adamantly focused on improving for the production are... -- Color Temperature of lighting. I have...
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    watch New short, what do you think?

    This is my second official production. It had a couple of hiccups, but I'm definitely getting better with practice. I would be very grateful for some feedback for areas done well and areas needing improvement... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DK4_zfwBXzE
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    watch First Production

    I have been wanting to get into some independent film making for awhile now, and here is my first ever production.... Tips? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KAoOWSxQxbI
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