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    watch A Moment (Film Noir Short)

    "A Moment" https://vimeo.com/51371077 What general feedback I've had has focused exclusively on story elements in the 3rd act, which I admit could be a lot cleaner, but I'm struggling for notes on the other elements, acting, pacing, mood, cinematography etc. It's been all about Act 3... I'm...
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