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Well first of all Zensteve thanks for your comment, sending good film-making vibes your way! I agree, too much story at the end which was sadly a side effect of not wanting to have the usual ambiguous ending or to use routine flashback sequences, unfortunately it seems not enough of the dots...

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Anybody? C'mon guys, filmmaker needs a little feedback. One word answers are fine...

"A Moment" https://vimeo.com/51371077 What general feedback I've had has focused exclusively on story elements in the 3rd act, which I admit could be a lot cleaner, but I'm struggling for notes on the other elements, acting, pacing, mood, cinematography etc. It's been all about Act 3... I'm...