Thank you! Good points, and it is very helpful to hear a producer's perspective. In particular, I appreciate your comments about Eve mellowing out. I was wondering whether she was losing too much of her edge in the middle of the script, so that's something that will need to be fixed in the next...
I am looking for feedback on the latest draft of a horror feature I have cowrote. Logline: A virginal girl trained in the art of hunting serial killers becomes the target of a deadly new murderer after she begins a forbidden romance. I have attached a google drive link...
Thanks for the feedback. That Souza/Fratboy thing was an error that for someone reason I didn't catch while proofreading. I had originally referred to the character as Fratboy, but then decided to change it while writing a later scene. Unfortunately, I neglected to reflect that change in the...
Hello. I have been working on the script "Wayward Children," a feature comedy set in the world of college theatre. Would anyone be interested in reading it? I have it up here https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B11eiOqZezwmQTRwMGRpY0JTQVNBMkVLT0Y5MEllZw/edit?pli=1
I plan on hiring a song writer to...