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Thanks for your feedback! As for some of your criticisms: *The opening was something I played with, but ultimately I came to what I have now because I didn't want to reveal Jason's identity until the first laugh line. As for the last shot, I agree that I held too long. I could make a bunch of...

...Yes? Yes. But mostly it's an irreverent comedy, and a chance for me to play around with genre a bit. Thanks for your feedback! Haha, thanks. I've had that problem with most of the stuff I've produced so far. I seem to be very interested in making films about "bad first student film" films...

Hey guys, I'm about to go into production for my new short in a few weeks, so started spending some time on the forums here. In the meantime, I wanted to get some feedback on a comedic short I finished a few months back. It was shot over the course of a few days, on the fly without much chance...