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    Research...

    Hi guys, a few more silly questions..! In my script, the main character works in the NYPD. The only parts in my script where that fact is actually shown happen in the late 50's-60's. It's not one of the MAIN things in the film and yet, those little details such as certain laws, jobs, boroughs...
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    A couple of general screenwriting questions!

    Hi guys (any women here bytheway?), I just reached page 20 of my screenplay. Now I have to say I seem to dislike 'going by the book' (i.e McKee) and it seems to be a lot easier for me to just "flow" with the writing.. also a lot more enjoyable. I haven't done any sort of outline, treatment...
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    My new script, quick look?

    The script I'm currently writing (page 14, draft 1) is feature film about an elderly man who thinks he got a chance to re-live his life and therefore tries to fix his past mistakes but then understands he can only watch it rather than participate in it. The script jumps from one age to another...
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    Writing a Synopsis

    Right, been looking for tips online on writing a synopsis and I still can't seem to do it properly.. Any advise for a damsel in distress??
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    describing photographs

    Hi guys, I'm describing a room now and in the room there are shelves with framed pictures. If, for exmaple I want one picture to be a family portrait from the 1920's and another to be a wedding picture from the 60's and more, etc.. How would you describe it? And what confused me more is do I...
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    feedback?

    Hi everyone, I was wondering if it's possible to send my script to anyone privately for feedback/reviewing. My friends can't really do it seeing as they're not very good with English and I don't want to put it up because I want to keep track of every person I send it to. I'm really scared it...
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    how to write this scene properly?

    Hi guys, My name is Liron, I'm 22 (girl) from Israel originally, currently residing in London :) I've recently started writing my first screenplay (using Cinergy) and after writing a 30-page long first draft I began my second draft... Now I'm having a bit of a hard time writing a scene in...
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