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first off, in the opening part, where you have a montage-type thing, you should put INT. SHELTER - DAY EXT - CITY - NIGHT stares, not stars There are many places where you need commas. there are many spelling errors. SAM Listen they wont be back for at least another day, so... maybe you...

maybe I could have a bible or a bunch of bibles all opened to that page, all eerily placed throughout the house near the ending? That might work to establish the connection. you mentioned the Half-Man thing before, I don't think the idea of a character whose experienced this before would make...

Back in the days of the Old Testament, during religious ceremonies, the towns would sacrifice a goat as well as apoint one goat as the scapegoat. The scapegoat was destined to wander the wilderness for eternity with the burden of the whole towns sins. The idea behind the story in Scapegoat, is...

Hey, I'm new to these boards and I've been seeking some feedback and some advice for the horror script that I wrote. It's called Scapegoat. It's a film I'll be making myself. Here's the link: http://www.brickhouse-ent.com/Scapegoat.htm Thanks in advanced