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Forum: Screenwriting 03-29-2019, 02:48 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 578
Posted By Panos
Of course C. A and B are poor and D is nonsense....

Of course C. A and B are poor and D is nonsense. In a screenplay you describe what you see. For emotions you also describe what you see, faces and movements. To give a bit more emphasis to an emotion...
Forum: Screenwriting 02-04-2019, 03:40 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,451
Posted By Panos
That happens almost every time. The end in The...

That happens almost every time. The end in The Sixth Sense script seems childish.. thank God MN changed it while he was giving life to black letters on white papers and so had a different view of his...
Forum: Screenwriting 02-02-2019, 09:45 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 909
Posted By Panos
By the way, why is she pouring coffee to his cup...

By the way, why is she pouring coffee to his cup after he has sit. Did she brought the cup empty first and then she brought the coffee or what?
Forum: Screenwriting 02-02-2019, 04:24 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 909
Posted By Panos
That's right! Also the sun is white not yellow...

That's right! Also the sun is white not yellow like kids draw it.
Forum: Screenwriting 02-01-2019, 07:03 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 909
Posted By Panos
I'm totally amazed by the idea and the way you...

I'm totally amazed by the idea and the way you handled it. A great surprise at the end! I might be amazed by the fact that you like surprises at the end.. I have to say that I'm fed up by short...
Forum: Screenwriting 01-28-2019, 05:02 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,329
Posted By Panos
Exactly :yes: although indietalk is right. It...

Exactly :yes: although indietalk is right. It doesn't tell to much..
Forum: Screenwriting 01-28-2019, 09:16 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,329
Posted By Panos
Make it one line only if it's possible

Make it one line only if it's possible
Forum: Screenwriting 01-27-2019, 06:48 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,467
Posted By Panos
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_tT_GjjlCLs

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_tT_GjjlCLs
Forum: Screenwriting 01-27-2019, 03:04 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,369
Posted By Panos
A bit.

A bit.
Forum: Screenwriting 01-27-2019, 02:59 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,467
Posted By Panos
Why should you tell about the kids problems? That...

Why should you tell about the kids problems? That is a huge misunderstanding I see a lot. A screenplay is not about general philosophical issues or about giving your soul to the paper or about...
Forum: Screenwriting 01-17-2019, 03:50 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,504
Posted By Panos
143 pages!! If you were Mel Gibson or Tarantino...

143 pages!! If you were Mel Gibson or Tarantino it's ok, but for us... no no no :no:
Forum: Screenwriting 01-15-2019, 06:56 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,951
Posted By Panos
No twist, no talent.

No twist, no talent.
Forum: Screenwriting 01-13-2019, 07:18 AM
Replies: 65
Views: 6,029
Posted By Panos
I think it is more of a part of a story, not a...

I think it is more of a part of a story, not a full story. As such is quite good.
Forum: Screenwriting 01-09-2019, 05:24 AM
Replies: 65
Views: 6,029
Posted By Panos
Quality's comment was too much: "I can't even...

Quality's comment was too much: "I can't even download it. I don't believe he wrote anything."
and "Of course, you can't read it guys, because it was never there, to begin with!". Even if pedramyz...
Forum: Screenwriting 01-08-2019, 09:17 PM
Replies: 65
Views: 6,029
Posted By Panos
Your pages create a lot of interest to the...

Your pages create a lot of interest to the reader. You have great ideas - that was actually known to us, you just didn't want to write them.

My Critique is this:
You are to hurry to tell the...
Forum: Screenwriting 01-01-2019, 07:48 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,736
Posted By Panos
Amen! Someone asked it...

Amen! Someone asked it...
Forum: Screenwriting 01-01-2019, 07:06 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,736
Posted By Panos
Still no information about the story. It is too...

Still no information about the story. It is too general. There is always interest about Egypt, but the logline must have information about the story.
Forum: Screenwriting 12-30-2018, 07:02 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,763
Posted By Panos
"...is part of that "Shock" or "Surprise" I want...

"...is part of that "Shock" or "Surprise" I want to show as an emotion." It is NOT your job to show. You have the movie in your mind and it loses power when you translate it to words on a paper....
Forum: Screenwriting 12-30-2018, 12:39 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,763
Posted By Panos
EXT. LINE - DAY A bunch of people are standing...

EXT. LINE - DAY
A bunch of people are standing in a line looking straight.
One of them is staring suprised, another one behind him is terrified while a boy in front of them is laughing so much...
Forum: Screenwriting 12-30-2018, 09:57 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,763
Posted By Panos
Always have in mind that you are writing for the...

Always have in mind that you are writing for the viewers of your movie, not for the readers of your script. If the viewer can't understand an emotion of an actor through their face and body...
Forum: Screenwriting 12-23-2018, 02:57 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,938
Posted By Panos
It sparks the interest to ask you more...

It sparks the interest to ask you more information about the movie.
Forum: Screenwriting 12-19-2018, 10:30 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,127
Posted By Panos
You said nothing about the story, which is the...

You said nothing about the story, which is the most important, to create interest to read it.
Forum: Screenwriting 11-24-2018, 07:20 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,118
Posted By Panos
Ideas can't be cheesy. In Birdman, the hero was a...

Ideas can't be cheesy. In Birdman, the hero was a (fictive) famous superhero, but the movie wasn't cheesy at all! But if you handle it the wrong way, it will be cheesy.

Anyway I don't get why you...
Forum: Screenwriting 11-16-2018, 11:01 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,166
Posted By Panos
Give some more information about what happens in...

Give some more information about what happens in these 500+ days. Also about why you can't shorten the 500+ days.
Forum: Screenwriting 11-13-2018, 03:19 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 2,937
Posted By Panos
That conversation is mind blowing! Project with...

That conversation is mind blowing! Project with certain future, rewrites, famous in Hollywood but still posting on a forum, Spielberg likes my script so I'm ready!

You are stuck on your English...
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