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Forum: Screenwriting 03-27-2011, 06:34 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 2,711
Posted By Loomis
After some thought, I've come to see the irony in...

After some thought, I've come to see the irony in the combination of this statement and the links provided, including mine.
Forum: Hollywood 03-27-2011, 06:05 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 2,694
Posted By Loomis
I've been watching the miniseries version of...

I've been watching the miniseries version of Scenes from a Marriage. It has some of the best use of close-ups you will ever see.
Forum: Hollywood 03-27-2011, 05:53 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 888
Posted By Loomis
"While there are only five or ten generic...

"While there are only five or ten generic Hollywood movies, there is no one kind of independent film. They come in as many flavors, sizes, and shapes as there are artists. That's why it is easier to...
Forum: Hollywood 03-07-2011, 10:02 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,131
Posted By Loomis
The deaths happened as they did throughout the...

The deaths happened as they did throughout the series. The people that got off the island just died at some other point. The church was a meeting place for everyone so they could progress together.
...
Forum: Screenwriting 03-07-2011, 09:40 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,622
Posted By Loomis
Did this clerk work at a Best Western by any...

Did this clerk work at a Best Western by any chance?

The jersey scene is a thinker. It would take, as you mention in the script, a bit of time to take off the shirt, particularly if she's hefty,...
Forum: Hollywood 03-07-2011, 08:46 PM
Replies: 2,975
Views: 258,235
Posted By Loomis
How a show that good got put on the CW I'll never...

How a show that good got put on the CW I'll never know.

....

The Last Temptation of Christ - 9/10 - Scorsese's spiritual poem. Beautiful.

Down by Law - 8/10 - Jarmusch's take on the buddy...
Forum: Music Videos/Commercials 03-07-2011, 11:38 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 4,419
Posted By Loomis
Nice work, Jeff. If you don't mind revealing, how...

Nice work, Jeff. If you don't mind revealing, how did you manage the effects during the beginning and end sequences? They fit the mood perfectly.
Forum: Hollywood 03-01-2011, 10:22 PM
Replies: 38
Views: 3,797
Posted By Loomis
From the The Classification and Rating...

From the The Classification and Rating Administration (CARA) rulebook:


The withdraw period is ninety days, but is being waived due to the promotion efforts mentioned in the article CF linked to.
Forum: Screenwriting 02-13-2011, 09:13 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 878
Posted By Loomis
Yep, I get you now. EXT. ALLEYWAY - CONTINUOUS...

Yep, I get you now. EXT. ALLEYWAY - CONTINUOUS should have been EXT. CITY SQUARE - CONTINUOUS. That was a big misstep. Thanks for picking up on it.

I'm with you on your other points, too. They'll...
Forum: Screenwriting 02-12-2011, 10:34 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 878
Posted By Loomis
Thanks SciFi. This was an experiment in writing...

Thanks SciFi. This was an experiment in writing an action heavy sequence. That information may have been helpful.



I may be misreading your comment, but I mention Gabrielle stumbling out of...
Forum: Screenwriting 02-12-2011, 12:55 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 878
Posted By Loomis
Google and I haven't been simpatico...

Google and I haven't been simpatico lately...Hopefully this works.

http://www.mediafire.com/?3hmmtf1hhl2m831
Forum: Screenwriting 02-12-2011, 12:05 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 878
Posted By Loomis
Rye Bread - Six Pages

Hope you enjoy it. Feel free to destroy.

Rye Bread (https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&pid=explorer&chrome=true&srcid=0B4qf32MBskwiMGVjZGVhZDQtY2VjNy00ZmE1LWI2NGYtNTI0ODhiYzUzYTM0&hl=en)
Forum: Screenwriting 02-02-2011, 02:27 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 935
Posted By Loomis
The note on rhythm, not page numbers, running...

The note on rhythm, not page numbers, running your story was nice.
Forum: Screenwriting 02-02-2011, 01:33 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 2,711
Posted By Loomis
Here's a good set of links from Robert McKee's...

Here's a good set of links from Robert McKee's site: http://mckeestory.com/?page_id=26
Forum: Screenwriting 02-01-2011, 07:33 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 691
Posted By Loomis
I love how your stuff is just this side of...

I love how your stuff is just this side of insanity. Fantasy said everything else. Don't change too much though.
Forum: The Lounge 01-30-2011, 10:07 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 655
Posted By Loomis
The Comics of Fletcher Hanks

Has anyone read this guy's stuff? It's awful and amazing at the same time.

Enjoy!

Fantomah: Mystery Woman of the Jungle (http://www.fortunecity.com/victorian/hartford/103/17two1.html)
Tabu:...
Forum: Promotion 01-30-2011, 02:14 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,180
Posted By Loomis
That's the best one yet, dar. Wayne has got...

That's the best one yet, dar.

Wayne has got me jonesin' for a drive-in theater. :)
Forum: Hollywood 01-30-2011, 01:53 PM
Replies: 589
Views: 20,906
Posted By Loomis
I've got no idea what yasha's or Ernest's is. ...

I've got no idea what yasha's or Ernest's is.

How 'bout this one:
http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/9953/vlcsnap2011012916h02m58.jpg (http://img822.imageshack.us/i/vlcsnap2011012916h02m58.jpg/)...
Forum: Screenwriting 01-30-2011, 01:37 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,738
Posted By Loomis
This is a good start. Here's a few things I...

This is a good start. Here's a few things I found.

Try to keep the parenthetical use to a minimum. "Yelling" and "confused", for example, could be eliminated. Often, the punctuation and scenario...
Forum: Screenwriting 01-28-2011, 02:10 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,511
Posted By Loomis
Let me preface this by saying you should do...

Let me preface this by saying you should do whatever you want. These are only notes/suggestions:

SUPER: "DAY 1."

INT. TAXI CAB - MORNING
...
Forum: Indie 01-27-2011, 03:23 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,756
Posted By Loomis
Funny. I was just looking at Berthold...

Funny. I was just looking at Berthold Steinhilber's book Ghost Towns of the American West. He's a master of long exposure light painting.
Forum: Screenwriting 01-26-2011, 11:14 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 570
Posted By Loomis
It sounds like a sequence, so, label them A-F...

It sounds like a sequence, so, label them A-F like:

SERIES OF SHOTS - INSERT WHAT THE SHOTS DETAIL

A)

B)

etc.
Forum: Screenwriting 01-26-2011, 11:08 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,702
Posted By Loomis
Even though you added some, it feels leaner. Very...

Even though you added some, it feels leaner. Very nice.

Here some notes I took while reading:

Make sure to put any text in caps and in quotes. For example:



If you want to show that...
Forum: Promotion 01-25-2011, 09:59 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 462
Posted By Loomis
The archives aren't too shabby either. Some of...

The archives aren't too shabby either. Some of the photography/illustrations are astounding.

I dig this image by Laurent Auxietre (http://tinyurl.com/5rmpg3e)
Forum: Hollywood 01-25-2011, 09:23 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 3,220
Posted By Loomis
But...but 3D is shiny with all sorts of fancy...

But...but 3D is shiny with all sorts of fancy doodads and the like.
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