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Forum: Screenwriting 12-19-2017, 05:53 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 869
Posted By Filman
Intimidation.

Intimidation.
Forum: Screenwriting 12-18-2017, 06:01 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 869
Posted By Filman
Sometimes here my comment is "cut the first...

Sometimes here my comment is "cut the first scene" or "cut the first half". This time I'd want the first dialogue to vanish.
Forum: Narrative 12-18-2017, 04:06 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 731
Posted By Filman
A delightful concept, with fresh acting. ...

A delightful concept, with fresh acting.

Note: Could keep mom in frame for a while before she says "Oh".
Forum: Newbies 12-16-2017, 07:24 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 997
Posted By Filman
Mc must mean split screen. Same thing, two angles.

Mc must mean split screen. Same thing, two angles.
Forum: Music Videos/Commercials 12-16-2017, 06:47 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,446
Posted By Filman
Good looking footage and well performed. I see a...

Good looking footage and well performed. I see a pattern in the cuts. The predictability there steals attention it shouldn't get.
Forum: Screenwriting 12-15-2017, 02:08 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,994
Posted By Filman
One second after the POV switch: ...

One second after the POV switch:
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Forum: Screenwriting 12-15-2017, 05:49 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,994
Posted By Filman
Very nice :thumbsup:

Very nice :thumbsup:
Forum: Screenwriting 12-14-2017, 06:17 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,994
Posted By Filman
Something tells me that Steven is doing some...

Something tells me that Steven is doing some intense rewriting now as he knows what to look for. Get those scenes to work, man. Then plug in the phones.
Forum: Narrative 12-13-2017, 06:27 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 605
Posted By Filman
The Jaws-like sound effect fills the room. Pretty...

The Jaws-like sound effect fills the room. Pretty awesome.
Forum: Screenwriting 12-12-2017, 03:53 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,994
Posted By Filman
I think they mean the whole scene. Scene...

I think they mean the whole scene. Scene structure.
Forum: Narrative 12-12-2017, 06:53 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 960
Posted By Filman
And that is a hell of a camera move. Did you...

And that is a hell of a camera move. Did you invent it? If so you should mention it, because it is about to be sto-o-len.
Forum: Narrative 12-11-2017, 09:32 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 811
Posted By Filman
Yup, Velusion hits the spot... and mussonman...

Yup, Velusion hits the spot... and mussonman knows his stuff, too.
Forum: Screenwriting 12-06-2017, 03:50 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 957
Posted By Filman
You don't mention how it ends, but I see what...

You don't mention how it ends, but I see what you're looking for, from the information you give.

Harper can't keep a man in her life. Her mother made her this way and she finds the answer in...
Forum: Experimental 12-06-2017, 10:34 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,382
Posted By Filman
Found it interesting that you've risen the stakes...

Found it interesting that you've risen the stakes through increasing camera shakes. Sort of replaced storytelling with camera terror, but now I read that it wasn't intentional. Maybe you shouldn't...
Forum: Narrative 12-01-2017, 04:33 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 734
Posted By Filman
Smooth and sympathetic, Sally. Must have hit...

Smooth and sympathetic, Sally. Must have hit right with your futuristic vision to get those nominations, baby.
Forum: Narrative 12-01-2017, 11:34 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 650
Posted By Filman
Yeah, seems you've spent your time wisely... and...

Yeah, seems you've spent your time wisely... and market New York as better than Texas.
Forum: Narrative 11-30-2017, 01:32 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 893
Posted By Filman
The theme could not be better. The execution...

The theme could not be better. The execution makes sense, is really good at first, a bit all over the place, about to slip through the fingers towards the end.
Forum: Screenwriting 11-30-2017, 06:02 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,883
Posted By Filman
Sorry everyone. Didn't mean to limit your...

Sorry everyone. Didn't mean to limit your creativity with my genre question. Assumed he knows already. Genre doesn't limit me, obviously.
Forum: Screenwriting 11-29-2017, 03:27 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,883
Posted By Filman
Genre, please. You already know your genre, for...

Genre, please. You already know your genre, for sure.
Forum: Narrative 11-27-2017, 06:30 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 807
Posted By Filman
Holy crapsy. The exterior shots are incredible. ...

Holy crapsy. The exterior shots are incredible.

Make a version where you get rid of the whole first half and open with the first ext shot. Awesomness, man. Flowers in the water - incredible....
Forum: Narrative 11-24-2017, 11:16 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 712
Posted By Filman
I find the acting excellent.

I find the acting excellent.
Forum: Newbies 11-23-2017, 05:47 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,143
Posted By Filman
The most clever ones ask for good advice...

The most clever ones ask for good advice beforehand.
Forum: Narrative 11-23-2017, 11:42 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 712
Posted By Filman
Yes, it sure has its moments. I think it needs...

Yes, it sure has its moments. I think it needs two corrections. Cut the opening scene and have her dance to a song with the chorus "I wouldn't do that if I were you".
Forum: Newbies 11-23-2017, 06:52 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,143
Posted By Filman
It doesn't really seem like a perfect fit to...

It doesn't really seem like a perfect fit to document your own life here. Make something that the TV would buy from you. Something for one of the shows you watch.
Forum: Screenwriting 11-18-2017, 03:23 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,019
Posted By Filman
You have the injured family stranded. The kids...

You have the injured family stranded. The kids are tied to the car, while the Zombies attack. It ends with daddy being dragged into the forest.

Why not have daddy unconscious during the whole...
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