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Forum: Welcome! 04-13-2018, 10:42 AM
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Posted By UneducatedFan
Welcome!

Welcome!
Forum: Screenwriting 04-12-2018, 12:39 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 403
Posted By UneducatedFan
IMHO it's about the voice of the two different...

IMHO it's about the voice of the two different examples which many people call "style".

Think of it maybe this way. When you tell a good ghost story around the campfire, it's important HOW you...
Forum: Screenwriting 03-30-2018, 03:51 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 763
Posted By UneducatedFan
It was just a joke. :)

It was just a joke. :)
Forum: Screenwriting 03-30-2018, 02:30 PM
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Views: 763
Posted By UneducatedFan
How 'Ready Player One' does it:

How 'Ready Player One' does it:
Forum: Screenwriting 03-30-2018, 02:24 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 763
Posted By UneducatedFan
How I would do it a couple different ways: ...

How I would do it a couple different ways:

INT. THE SCHMIDT BASEMENT - NIGHT

After descending the stairs, Annie looks around at the almost completely vacant square room. A lone table in the...
Forum: Hollywood 03-19-2018, 09:39 AM
Replies: 3,055
Views: 281,542
Posted By UneducatedFan
Downsizing I read the screenplay and then...

Downsizing

I read the screenplay and then watched the film. The screenplay seemed to start with a great premise but get off track early and then kept taking swings at drama that kept missing.
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Forum: Hollywood 03-16-2018, 03:33 PM
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Views: 281,542
Posted By UneducatedFan
Took a couple of flights this week and watched...

Took a couple of flights this week and watched movies both ways.

Detroit:
Pretty good. Gritty and I knew nothing about the historical event and it said in the film they filled in items that...
Forum: Screenwriting 03-13-2018, 09:51 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 861
Posted By UneducatedFan
I like your series as well. I think I've seen you...

I like your series as well. I think I've seen you post on other forums as well (donedeal?).

keep it up!
Forum: Screenwriting 03-12-2018, 04:00 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,621
Posted By UneducatedFan
Maybe it was clear and I just misread it.

Maybe it was clear and I just misread it.
Forum: Screenwriting 03-12-2018, 09:19 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,621
Posted By UneducatedFan
I thought I did but then it didn't make sense why...

I thought I did but then it didn't make sense why the guy would have to go somewhere to get Spencer when he already had him when the guy handed him the key. If I read it right, Spencer was the key,...
Forum: Screenwriting 03-11-2018, 10:22 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,621
Posted By UneducatedFan
That was interesting. Visually it makes me think...

That was interesting. Visually it makes me think it would be animated. Maybe even a black and white pencil animation.

I wasn't sure why the key was SPENCER and then the guy asked for SPENCER and...
Forum: Hollywood 03-11-2018, 08:22 PM
Replies: 3,055
Views: 281,542
Posted By UneducatedFan
The Secret Scripture. Obviously not as good...

The Secret Scripture.

Obviously not as good as the book but was well done. It's always a challenge to fit a book with so many things happening into a 2hr movie.

Acting was good.

I recommend...
Forum: Screenwriting 03-09-2018, 12:27 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,621
Posted By UneducatedFan
Still says it's not publicly available. :(

Still says it's not publicly available. :(
Forum: Screenwriting 03-08-2018, 12:45 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,705
Posted By UneducatedFan
Hey, you leave your mother out of this! ;)

Hey, you leave your mother out of this! ;)
Forum: Screenwriting 03-08-2018, 11:29 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,705
Posted By UneducatedFan
Quality, I hope you don't get discouraged in...

Quality, I hope you don't get discouraged in reading the replies. I hope they are seen and absorbed/digested as an attempt to help improve both this writing sample as well your writing in general. I...
Forum: Hollywood 03-08-2018, 10:20 AM
Replies: 3,055
Views: 281,542
Posted By UneducatedFan
The Discovery

Premise get's high marks: 8/10.
Execution: 5/10.
Ending: 4/10.

Side plot and "brother" character felt bolted on.
Forum: Promotion 03-07-2018, 05:07 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 737
Posted By UneducatedFan
Welcome back and nice to meet you.

Welcome back and nice to meet you.
Forum: Screenwriting 03-07-2018, 12:09 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,705
Posted By UneducatedFan
Ah! Got it. My bad for missing that.

Ah! Got it. My bad for missing that.
Forum: Screenwriting 03-06-2018, 07:34 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,705
Posted By UneducatedFan
Ok I read through it and here are my thoughts...

Ok I read through it and here are my thoughts (take them with a grain of salt):

In reading it felt like it was a BladeRunner homage. Was that the intent?

First establishing scene:


Insert a...
Forum: Screenwriting 02-23-2018, 11:05 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 750
Posted By UneducatedFan
Welcome!

Welcome!
Forum: Indie 06-19-2017, 02:37 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 965
Posted By UneducatedFan
Still working on two screenplays. One sci-fi and...

Still working on two screenplays. One sci-fi and one historical biopic. Also reading a screenplay for a friend and trying to catch up on Taboo.
Forum: The Lounge 06-05-2017, 11:23 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,582
Posted By UneducatedFan
Congrats!

Congrats!
Forum: Indie 03-28-2017, 10:55 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,028
Posted By UneducatedFan
Screenplays.

Screenplays.
Forum: Welcome! 03-22-2017, 04:03 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 852
Posted By UneducatedFan
Welcome and good luck!

Welcome and good luck!
Forum: Welcome! 03-22-2017, 04:02 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 668
Posted By UneducatedFan
Welcome! Screenwriter here wishing you luck!

Welcome! Screenwriter here wishing you luck!
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