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Forum: Screenwriting 11-15-2018, 04:06 PM
Replies: 7
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Posted By stevencwood
Yea I think you're right. The way she comes off...

Yea I think you're right. The way she comes off already is more forward than Vince. He's just going with the flow while she seems to have a motive. Check out the OP or a couple posts above if you...
Forum: Screenwriting 11-15-2018, 04:02 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 543
Posted By stevencwood
Vince meets Susie at the gate while she's...

Vince meets Susie at the gate while she's emptying out her purse looking for her ticket. Vince helps her find it but brushes the encounter off as a one-time thing.

I could easily add some sort of...
Forum: Screenwriting 11-15-2018, 02:21 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 543
Posted By stevencwood
Updated to to reflect the airport encounter. ...

Updated to to reflect the airport encounter.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/187jWMZqEW4kxdOn4Q-aD67pcCfuPwKiE/view?usp=drivesdk
Forum: Screenwriting 11-07-2018, 05:44 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 543
Posted By stevencwood
I agree. Like I said, I've written some of this...

I agree. Like I said, I've written some of this already but under different circumstances. Some of the exchanges will carry over to this new version. I've linked the existing version so you can get a...
Forum: Screenwriting 11-07-2018, 05:15 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 543
Posted By stevencwood
Dialogue Heavy Romantic Drama Idea

We're all familiar with the "Before" trilogy, right? I'll assume so.

Following in that lane, I'm in the process of writing something similar and I wanted to get a couple of opinions. It's a simple...
Forum: Screenwriting 10-09-2018, 02:38 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 654
Posted By stevencwood
I'm very curious what you have in two pages that...

I'm very curious what you have in two pages that would be enough for a complete film.
Forum: Screenwriting 10-09-2018, 08:59 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 654
Posted By stevencwood
Regardless of length and amount of dialogue, you...

Regardless of length and amount of dialogue, you need to format this thing into a proper screenplay format. If you hand a filmmaker a couple pages with of blocked text, with no obvious action lines...
Forum: Screenwriting 09-27-2018, 02:25 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 633
Posted By stevencwood
Subject matter aside, English doesn't seem to be...

Subject matter aside, English doesn't seem to be your strong suit...so I'd say no, do not write this in English.

Besides that, even the most insensitive or controversial stuff can be handled well.
Forum: Screenwriting 09-24-2018, 02:59 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 584
Posted By stevencwood
Horror is all about creating a mood that induces...

Horror is all about creating a mood that induces a certain type of feeling/reaction. You can do this without the grotesque visuals.
Forum: Screenwriting 09-20-2018, 03:31 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 690
Posted By stevencwood
Reverse the roles, go the route of The Hand That...

Reverse the roles, go the route of The Hand That Rocks The Cradle or Poison Ivy. That'll show 'em.
Forum: Screenwriting 09-20-2018, 02:42 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 690
Posted By stevencwood
Monster is another one

Monster is another one
Forum: Screenwriting 09-20-2018, 11:51 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 690
Posted By stevencwood
Yup, you should give some info regarding your...

Yup, you should give some info regarding your character. I've written a bunch of stuff where the main character isn't a traditional good dude who you'd want to route for.
Forum: Screenwriting 09-20-2018, 11:16 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 690
Posted By stevencwood
Don't go for likable, go for relatable. See...

Don't go for likable, go for relatable. See movies like Nightcrawler if you want a recent movie where the main character is a "bad" guy.
Forum: Screenwriting 09-11-2018, 11:16 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 863
Posted By stevencwood
Remember in Heat when Pacino and De Niro sit...

Remember in Heat when Pacino and De Niro sit across from one another and flat out tell each other their plans.
Forum: Screenwriting 09-04-2018, 02:37 PM
Replies: 77
Views: 3,167
Posted By stevencwood
Check out the trailer for sure. Itís one of the...

Check out the trailer for sure. Itís one of the better thrillers from the past couple years for sure.
Forum: Screenwriting 09-04-2018, 02:18 PM
Replies: 77
Views: 3,167
Posted By stevencwood
Yea I get what you're saying. I've said from the...

Yea I get what you're saying. I've said from the beginning I don't want Dale to find her ALIVE anyway.

Three Billboards had too many characters, which is another thing I'm trying to avoid. Have...
Forum: Screenwriting 09-04-2018, 01:03 PM
Replies: 77
Views: 3,167
Posted By stevencwood
I have a real hard time writing an outline due to...

I have a real hard time writing an outline due to basically condensing everything into just a couple of pages. I'm more of the ilk that will list out plot points and fill out the "in-between" stuff...
Forum: Screenwriting 09-04-2018, 12:26 PM
Replies: 77
Views: 3,167
Posted By stevencwood
Thanks for checking it out. Yea, I admit...

Thanks for checking it out.

Yea, I admit the intro is a bit long winded but then again itís easier to cut than it is to add. I still need to introduce the dynamic between the sheriff and Dale. I...
Forum: Screenwriting 09-04-2018, 09:42 AM
Replies: 77
Views: 3,167
Posted By stevencwood
Pretty substantial update. These 18 pages follow...

Pretty substantial update. These 18 pages follow Dale into town and introduce the idea of the sheriff being suspicious of him. Dale also visits the witness who called the tip line regarding the...
Forum: Screenwriting 08-28-2018, 05:47 PM
Replies: 77
Views: 3,167
Posted By stevencwood
I’ve written an opening, 8 pages and sets up a...

I’ve written an opening, 8 pages and sets up a couple things.

https://drive.google.com/open?id=1ZPdTTK-XNlTOPzgi7NKFoQPZUdOHUU1D
Forum: Screenwriting 08-28-2018, 02:48 PM
Replies: 77
Views: 3,167
Posted By stevencwood
Iím going to outline some key points today. I got...

Iím going to outline some key points today. I got some character biographies and personalities nailed down.
Forum: Screenwriting 08-28-2018, 02:38 PM
Replies: 77
Views: 3,167
Posted By stevencwood
Oh yea I know. Iím just saying thatís his...

Oh yea I know. Iím just saying thatís his profession. Makes it better than if he was just a regular dude
Forum: Screenwriting 08-28-2018, 11:10 AM
Replies: 77
Views: 3,167
Posted By stevencwood
I get what you're going for. I think I'll make...

I get what you're going for. I think I'll make Dale a private investigator.
Forum: Screenwriting 08-28-2018, 10:21 AM
Replies: 77
Views: 3,167
Posted By stevencwood
Thanks. Yea like I said, I've never been good at...

Thanks. Yea like I said, I've never been good at these.
Forum: Screenwriting 08-28-2018, 10:17 AM
Replies: 77
Views: 3,167
Posted By stevencwood
Wow, that's fucking nuts. By the way, here's a...

Wow, that's fucking nuts. By the way, here's a logline...which I'm not very good at. I'm also a few pages into the story.

After pursuing multiple leads regarding his missing sister, Dale finds...
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