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Forum: Screenwriting 03-02-2019, 03:38 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 676
Posted By UneducatedFan
This. The logline needs to be about the story of...

This. The logline needs to be about the story of the character IN the surroundings and happenings.

You've provided the setting, but you haven't provided us:

The character (who we see/experience...
Forum: Screenwriting 03-01-2019, 10:05 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,338
Posted By UneducatedFan
After reading a bit, my recommendation would be: ...

After reading a bit, my recommendation would be:

Cut down on all the very specific direction in the action lines.

Trim out a lot of the redundant dialogue. By redundant I mean that dialogue...
Forum: Welcome! 10-22-2018, 04:22 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,140
Posted By UneducatedFan
:hi:

:hi:
Forum: Hollywood 10-11-2018, 11:49 AM
Replies: 3,294
Views: 379,128
Posted By UneducatedFan
Men Don't Leave 7/10 from 1990. Some...

Men Don't Leave

7/10 from 1990.

Some pretty good performances with young Joan Cusack, Chris McDonnell and Kathy Bates.

Kinda uneven at times to portray each of the characters in a unique...
Forum: Welcome! 10-10-2018, 02:35 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 772
Posted By UneducatedFan
:hi:

:hi:
Forum: Narrative 10-03-2018, 05:54 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,007
Posted By UneducatedFan
:thumbsup:

:thumbsup:
Forum: Networking 10-03-2018, 05:40 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,203
Posted By UneducatedFan
Short and sweet. Done.

Short and sweet. Done.
Forum: Welcome! 10-03-2018, 05:36 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,447
Posted By UneducatedFan
:hi: Screenwriter here was well.

:hi:

Screenwriter here was well.
Forum: Welcome! 10-03-2018, 05:28 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,213
Posted By UneducatedFan
:hi:

:hi:
Forum: Screenwriting 10-02-2018, 11:46 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 858
Posted By UneducatedFan
:thumbsup:

:thumbsup:
Forum: Welcome! 10-02-2018, 10:28 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 980
Posted By UneducatedFan
:hi:

:hi:
Forum: Welcome! 10-02-2018, 10:28 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 764
Posted By UneducatedFan
:hi:

:hi:
Forum: Hollywood 10-02-2018, 10:26 AM
Replies: 3,294
Views: 379,128
Posted By UneducatedFan
Captain Fantastic 7.5/10 Pretty good flick...

Captain Fantastic
7.5/10

Pretty good flick about a deeply idealistic and sheltered family with believable characters whose lives are shattered by the mental illness and death of their mother at...
Forum: Screenwriting 10-02-2018, 09:50 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 858
Posted By UneducatedFan
Neither of those would lead me to read them IMHO....

Neither of those would lead me to read them IMHO.

Here's a different approach to help look at it from a different angle.

A gay couple, dissatisfied and depressed at the current stagnant state...
Forum: Welcome! 09-26-2018, 08:43 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 874
Posted By UneducatedFan
:hi:

:hi:
Forum: Screenwriting 09-24-2018, 04:00 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 772
Posted By UneducatedFan
https://www.sparknotes.com/philosophy/poetics/

https://www.sparknotes.com/philosophy/poetics/
Forum: Hollywood 09-24-2018, 10:58 AM
Replies: 3,294
Views: 379,128
Posted By UneducatedFan
Patriot (Amazon Series) 9/10 This is my...

Patriot (Amazon Series)
9/10

This is my second time through it.

It's a brilliant slow burn character dark comedy. Sooo good.
Forum: Narrative 09-21-2018, 02:08 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 986
Posted By UneducatedFan
:thumbsup: Haha!

:thumbsup:
Haha!
Forum: Screenwriting 09-20-2018, 01:44 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,090
Posted By UneducatedFan
This. "sympathetic" is also what it's called. ...

This. "sympathetic" is also what it's called.

Dexter was a serial killer but we were able relate to him and/or have sympathy at times.

I watched the movie "Young Adult" with Charlize Theron....
Forum: Hollywood 09-17-2018, 10:35 PM
Replies: 3,294
Views: 379,128
Posted By UneducatedFan
Sweet Virginia 7.5/10 Well done and...

Sweet Virginia

7.5/10

Well done and directed low-budget crime drama. Pretty well acted.

Interesting was reading the very heavy on page directed screenplay from the China Brothers and then...
Forum: Animation 09-14-2018, 08:34 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 2,012
Posted By UneducatedFan
:thumbsup: I remember that one! Left an...

:thumbsup:

I remember that one! Left an impression...or many spots of impression all over.
Forum: Welcome! 09-14-2018, 08:23 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 791
Posted By UneducatedFan
:hi:

:hi:
Forum: Welcome! 09-13-2018, 12:57 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,011
Posted By UneducatedFan
:hi:

:hi:
Forum: Welcome! 09-12-2018, 12:55 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,095
Posted By UneducatedFan
:hi:

:hi:
Forum: Indie 09-12-2018, 12:54 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,260
Posted By UneducatedFan
More writing and rewriting.

More writing and rewriting.
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