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Forum: Screenwriting Yesterday, 01:44 PM
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Posted By UneducatedFan
This. "sympathetic" is also what it's called. ...

This. "sympathetic" is also what it's called.

Dexter was a serial killer but we were able relate to him and/or have sympathy at times.

I watched the movie "Young Adult" with Charlize Theron....
Forum: Hollywood 09-17-2018, 10:35 PM
Replies: 3,153
Views: 312,841
Posted By UneducatedFan
Sweet Virginia 7.5/10 Well done and...

Sweet Virginia

7.5/10

Well done and directed low-budget crime drama. Pretty well acted.

Interesting was reading the very heavy on page directed screenplay from the China Brothers and then...
Forum: Animation 09-14-2018, 08:34 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 323
Posted By UneducatedFan
:thumbsup: I remember that one! Left an...

:thumbsup:

I remember that one! Left an impression...or many spots of impression all over.
Forum: Welcome! 09-14-2018, 08:23 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 220
Posted By UneducatedFan
:hi:

:hi:
Forum: Welcome! 09-13-2018, 12:57 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 301
Posted By UneducatedFan
:hi:

:hi:
Forum: Welcome! 09-12-2018, 12:55 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 358
Posted By UneducatedFan
:hi:

:hi:
Forum: Indie 09-12-2018, 12:54 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 356
Posted By UneducatedFan
More writing and rewriting.

More writing and rewriting.
Forum: Hollywood 09-10-2018, 10:00 AM
Replies: 3,153
Views: 312,841
Posted By UneducatedFan
Winchester 5/10 Nerve 6.5/10 ...

Winchester

5/10

Nerve

6.5/10

First was very, very clunky for a ghost thriller horror.
Forum: Screenplays 09-09-2018, 10:55 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 735
Posted By UneducatedFan
The original and your new link are identical with...

The original and your new link are identical with zero changes.
Forum: Newbies 09-07-2018, 04:53 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 321
Posted By UneducatedFan
:hi:

:hi:
Forum: Narrative 09-07-2018, 01:30 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 334
Posted By UneducatedFan
:thumbsup:

:thumbsup:
Forum: Welcome! 09-04-2018, 03:10 PM
Replies: 3
Hi
Views: 313
Posted By UneducatedFan
Arigato Mr. Roboto!

Arigato Mr. Roboto!
Forum: Screenwriting 09-04-2018, 02:33 PM
Replies: 78
Views: 2,362
Posted By UneducatedFan
I haven't even heard of Sweet Virginia so I'll...

I haven't even heard of Sweet Virginia so I'll have to check it out.
Forum: Screenwriting 09-04-2018, 02:13 PM
Replies: 78
Views: 2,362
Posted By UneducatedFan
IMHO to avoid the "3 Billboards" comparison, he...

IMHO to avoid the "3 Billboards" comparison, he finds her. Something along the lines of the Se7en ending (maybe not that emotionally charged) but they find a body, the LEO tries to put Dale's mind at...
Forum: Screenwriting 09-04-2018, 12:51 PM
Replies: 78
Views: 2,362
Posted By UneducatedFan
Only way to find out? Write or outline the rest...

Only way to find out? Write or outline the rest of it. Heck maybe he does in the first draft and doesn't in the second.

Keep going and let us know how it progresses.
Forum: Screenwriting 09-04-2018, 12:19 PM
Replies: 78
Views: 2,362
Posted By UneducatedFan
Initial thoughts. Really liked it. A couple...

Initial thoughts. Really liked it.

A couple of questions.

Do we need to see the plane touch down? Do we need to see Meredith follow the plane to the pumps after she points that direction (I...
Forum: Screenwriting 09-04-2018, 09:21 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 359
Posted By UneducatedFan
It's a good thing if the transitions are natural...

It's a good thing if the transitions are natural and believable. Meaning natural for the scene that they are in and for the characters you've created.

As an example, in Better Call Saul there is a...
Forum: Indie 09-03-2018, 08:41 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 621
Posted By UneducatedFan
Sent off a short episode. Wrote opening scene of...

Sent off a short episode. Wrote opening scene of one feature. Rewriting another.
Forum: Hollywood 09-03-2018, 03:45 PM
Replies: 3,153
Views: 312,841
Posted By UneducatedFan
Young Adult - 8/10 Good drama with an...

Young Adult - 8/10

Good drama with an unlikable character. You end up hoping she fails and wakes up and she fails but...
Forum: Screenwriting 08-27-2018, 03:55 PM
Replies: 78
Views: 2,362
Posted By UneducatedFan
And of course throw in a prostitute who hangs out...

And of course throw in a prostitute who hangs out in front of the Hotel who he doesn't pay for her "services" but she has the hook up/low down on the town, the cops (whom she knows both as an inmate...
Forum: Narrative 08-27-2018, 02:20 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 493
Posted By UneducatedFan
:thumbsup:

:thumbsup:
Forum: Screenwriting 08-27-2018, 01:36 PM
Replies: 78
Views: 2,362
Posted By UneducatedFan
:thumbsup: I think it still could work.

:thumbsup:

I think it still could work.
Forum: Screenwriting 08-27-2018, 01:27 PM
Replies: 78
Views: 2,362
Posted By UneducatedFan
I say, make Dale a longtime drifter. It's been...

I say, make Dale a longtime drifter. It's been years since he contacted home. He's in a shelter or somewhere and sees a BB with a missing flyer of his sister. He calls home, is informed she's been...
Forum: Screenwriting 08-27-2018, 12:57 PM
Replies: 78
Views: 2,362
Posted By UneducatedFan
Now to crack the egg on how Dale is led to that...

Now to crack the egg on how Dale is led to that town...A cell call from her hit on a cell tower in that area? She last was travelling from one town to the other and Harper is the only town between...
Forum: Screenwriting 08-27-2018, 12:04 PM
Replies: 78
Views: 2,362
Posted By UneducatedFan
Oh hell. Now I'm hoping he makes it like First...

Oh hell. Now I'm hoping he makes it like First Blood with a John Rambo like character and a corrupt police force. Maybe less on the "blow up the town" approach...then again, maybe not.
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