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Forum: Screenwriting 08-28-2018, 10:35 AM
Replies: 78
Views: 2,362
Posted By joey1320
Wow this is creepy. Hopefully she's okay.

Wow this is creepy. Hopefully she's okay.
Forum: Narrative 08-27-2018, 08:52 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 493
Posted By joey1320
From the fight taking place, to the appearance of...

From the fight taking place, to the appearance of Ford next to Luca, the first thing that popped into my head was that Luca was mentally unstable and had a hallucination after Ford threw away the...
Forum: Narrative 08-27-2018, 08:14 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 493
Posted By joey1320
Unfortunately I did not pick up on the...

Unfortunately I did not pick up on the dissociative identity disorder experienced by Luca.

Wouldn't having Ford in the scenes next to Luca make it more difficult to determine/guess he's not real?
Forum: Narrative 08-27-2018, 08:05 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 484
Posted By joey1320
I'm intrigued to see what happens.

I'm intrigued to see what happens.
Forum: Narrative 08-27-2018, 08:02 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 473
Posted By joey1320
It was a good trailer. I would like to see the...

It was a good trailer. I would like to see the rest.
Forum: Narrative 08-27-2018, 07:57 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 369
Posted By joey1320
I'll preface this by saying I hate giving...

I'll preface this by saying I hate giving feedback that doesn't really help the other person, with that said, I didn't make it past the 3min mark. Just couldn't.

Glad you guys won a bunch of...
Forum: Narrative 08-27-2018, 07:49 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 493
Posted By joey1320
At the 1:38 minute mark the dead body moves his...

At the 1:38 minute mark the dead body moves his left pinky finger. I noticed it immediately and was expecting the person to either be faking his death to attack the unsuspecting intruder or turn into...
Forum: Screenwriting 08-27-2018, 05:30 PM
Replies: 78
Views: 2,362
Posted By joey1320
This was a woman taking things into her own hands...

This was a woman taking things into her own hands in regards to a serial killer and human trafficking. Great series.
Forum: Screenwriting 08-27-2018, 03:47 PM
Replies: 78
Views: 2,362
Posted By joey1320
Reminds me of Alexandra Sokoloff's "Moon...

Reminds me of Alexandra Sokoloff's "Moon Series".
Forum: Screenwriting 08-27-2018, 03:31 PM
Replies: 78
Views: 2,362
Posted By joey1320
Maybe Dale's sister wasn't living in town but...

Maybe Dale's sister wasn't living in town but possibly visiting someone there, and that's when she went missing?
Forum: Screenwriting 08-27-2018, 11:56 AM
Replies: 78
Views: 2,362
Posted By joey1320
This sounds like a Jack Reacher story. I'm...

This sounds like a Jack Reacher story.

I'm a sucker for the loner, play by the rules/honesty badass that is placed in a situation he doesn't even want to be but comes out the other side taking...
Forum: Narrative 08-21-2018, 11:49 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 468
Posted By joey1320
This was really well done. Good job and best...

This was really well done.
Good job and best of luck in the future.
Forum: Screenwriting 08-21-2018, 11:40 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,328
Posted By joey1320
Anyone else?

Anyone else?
Forum: Screenwriting 08-10-2018, 12:25 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,328
Posted By joey1320
Collateral damage ;)

Collateral damage ;)
Forum: Screenwriting 08-10-2018, 10:21 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,328
Posted By joey1320
Thanks for the reply. All feedback is highly...

Thanks for the reply. All feedback is highly appreciated.
Forum: Screenwriting 08-10-2018, 07:02 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,454
Posted By joey1320
I hate to be negative but I got to the 10th page...

I hate to be negative but I got to the 10th page and stopped reading.

The conversations don't seem real and feel forced. The fact that Jack is 27yo, only has 43 followers online but hasn't...
Forum: Screenwriting 08-09-2018, 08:26 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,328
Posted By joey1320
Opening scene of new idea I'm working on. Feedback appreciated.

Hello everyone ☺️

I'm working on a new idea and have finished (Are they ever finished?) the opening scene. I'm currently outlining the full movie but wanted to see what the forum thought of what...
Forum: Screenwriting 08-09-2018, 07:46 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,905
Posted By joey1320
I like this a lot. I can't help on the script...

I like this a lot. I can't help on the script writing but I do like the story itself. The futuristic mixed in with the old Western makes it interesting.

Good work ;)
Forum: Newbies 05-13-2018, 07:24 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 846
Posted By joey1320
Why not be the change you want to see? I'm...

Why not be the change you want to see?

I'm sure there are a lot of other people in your same shoes, try reaching out to them. Social media has made it plenty easy for people with likeminded...
Forum: Experimental 05-13-2018, 06:22 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,645
Posted By joey1320
This was really good. Best of luck!

This was really good.
Best of luck!
Forum: Newbies 02-20-2018, 02:46 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,358
Posted By joey1320
Thanks for the detailed response. I'll apply...

Thanks for the detailed response.
I'll apply the advice :)

Glad to know you enjoyed the story. I have another one, somewhat similar, which I want to get to asap since it's just harassing me on a...
Forum: Newbies 02-20-2018, 11:27 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,358
Posted By joey1320
I've fixed the grammar and tense issues. ...

I've fixed the grammar and tense issues.
Thanks for the help.
Forum: Newbies 02-20-2018, 08:00 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,358
Posted By joey1320
For anyone who has read the script, any feedback...

For anyone who has read the script, any feedback on the actual story?
Forum: Newbies 02-19-2018, 09:18 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,358
Posted By joey1320
No, actually what I meant was that I'm writing...

No, actually what I meant was that I'm writing the screenplays on my cellphone, usually while at work, although sometimes I write them while trying to put the little ones to sleep. I hardly have any...
Forum: Newbies 02-19-2018, 09:05 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,358
Posted By joey1320
Thanks for the tips. I'll work on switching to...

Thanks for the tips.
I'll work on switching to the correct tenses.
Not sure why I kept going back and forth on those.

Regarding the two spaces after a period, I'm writing this on my cellphone,...
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