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    watch The Last Library trailer

    Cheers! Thanks for the kind words!
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    watch Horror Trailer

    The end of everything? But, I like everything!!!!
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    watch Withdrawn - short film

    I really liked the conceit of ghosts being masked, even if you had seen their faces in the memories. I was a little confused about the story. Did he kill himself and then he was happy finally?
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    Hello! Looking for a Producer!

    I'm not in SoCal, but I wonder if putting synopsis or longline might attract more attention to this post. I'm not saying that you should reveal the twist but some sort of tease to tickle our curiosity glands couldn't hurt. Honestly, "sci-fi/horror" is so broad, it's tough for me to imagine what...
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    watch The Last Library trailer

    All this conversation generated by the tease and your telling me I should have given them more? I don't know how to use those little smileys so...**wink** There's a very specific aesthetic we're trying to build over these projects. It's meant to be anarchic and off-kilter. We are hyper-aware...
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    watch The Last Library trailer

    Thanks for the feedback. It's no accident that there's a wrench in the gears there. The whole project was meant to be that kind of vibe ("is this deadly serious or totally cornball?). We're just getting started, but we have a theory - if we can figure out the correct recipe for that kind of...
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    watch The Last Library trailer

    The book isn't mentioned in the trailer because there's already quite a bit of other business we wanted to get to. We felt like the who-can-you-trust vibe was more interesting than the mechanics of the plot so we tried to cram more of that in. Honestly, if you're having trouble telling if it's...
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    watch The Last Library trailer

    Thanks for the feedback. We shot and color corrected the best we could with the resources we had and we're looking forward to delivering more robust looks in future work. We were fairly proud of the look but I guess we have a bit further to go before that feeling is earned. Also, those text...
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    watch The Last Library trailer

    You'll just have to come out and see it. Those things could save your life.
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    watch Need critics for this 1 min video

    If this were Reddit, we could get all TIL up in this piece. But, it's not. So, we can't. I'm looking forward to your next projects. When my wife started making movies, she'd burn through her ideas at a breakneck pace to the point that an average viewer couldn't even tell what was going on. Let...
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    watch The Last Library trailer

    My wife and I just finished producing our first feature and wanted to share the trailer. We hope you like it. https://vimeo.com/226093138
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    watch Need critics for this 1 min video

    I feel like it's an over-stuffed minute. Too much happens with no clarity. If you had more like 50 seconds of clarity and then a ten second tease of incoming chaos, I'd be much more interested in whatever is next. As it stands, there's more mystery than is worth investing in. Is his new power...
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    watch Looking for Feedback on My New Short Comedy Sketch

    EAT THE HAIR NEXT TIME!
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    watch Our first teaser for the feature Finding Alice

    It looks interesting. When you cut the full trailer, be sure to focus more on what separates this story from all the others other there. I feel like you've given us a sense of mood but not much else.
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    Jesse, Tokyo Filmmaker, checking in

    Hello! My name is Jesse and I'm a filmmaker living and working in Tokyo. I found this forum and thought it might be a good one to join, so I joined it. You may all return from the edge of your seats now.
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