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Thanks a bunch for all the replies so far, btw! I'll give it a proper go to rework that section of the script along with a few others that are similar to somewhat extent (very descriptive & lacking dialogue). I've got here another section of the script, this part containing dialogue. Am I...

I felt that the way I was writing was supposed to "set the tone" of the scene. How can I do that but avoid all the novel-like clutter?

Heya! First of all, I need to share the fact that I have never actually written a proper script before. I've half-written scripts for short-projects that I've directed myself. The projects were done with friends. Having a loose script was done on purpose as I wished to allow myself and the...