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    cant make it past page 10

    Wsup ppl, I started writing a screenplay and the first 10 pages were a success. However I'm stuck now. I'm not sure if ive lost interest in my story or i'm just having typical writers block. im trying to write it according to the BS2 and Ive reached what would be the catalyst but im lost...
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    Been working on my first screenplay. Reviews/advice please?

    Collections Written By Wesley Smith 5002 Hillsboro Ct Hampton, VA 757-320-9822 INT...
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    15 beats for a film??

    When writing a screenplay how important is it to hit all 15 beats according to the BS2? Or is it okay to write your story around the conflict??
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    Looking for feedback on my screenplay. Tips/advice?

    Also I would like to mention that's MRS. WILCOX is not the psycho stalker, she is just a lady on the phone in the opening scene.
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    Looking for feedback on my screenplay. Tips/advice?

    thanks alot guys i really appreciate the advice. it seems as a comedy but actually it will be a suspense/thriller about a debt collector being stalked/harrassed by a psychotic debtor But what exactly do you mean by active voice and not progressive? Jow - this is what i was waiting for. the...
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    Looking for feedback on my screenplay. Tips/advice?

    These are the first 2 pages of my screenplay. This is my first screenplay ive began writing and im in need of someone elses opinion other than my own. Thanks in advance. INT. OFFICE ROOM - AFTERNOON Identical rows of cubicles occupy a dull office space. Frustrating and calm...
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    How do i add my screenplay in screenplay format??

    Ive started a screenplay in adobe story and exprted it as a pdf. However i cannot find out how to upload it to IT for review. Do i need to export it differently or just say F*** the format and copy and paste the whole thing??
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    Good concept or no?

    I never thought of writing from the debtors point of view so that's dope And suspense/thriller is exactly what I'm going for idk why I said horror. Thanks for the support.
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    Good concept or no?

    lol, i actually want to write this screenplay being that it would be my first screenplay that i planned seeking funds for(kickstarter). but were you interested in writing it? if so maybe we can work something out. Thanks for the support.
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    Good concept or no?

    Wsup everybody, ive recently came up with a film concept for a (hopefully) feature length film. The film is named 'Collections' and is about a debt collector who finds himself being stalked/harrassed and possibly killed by the deranged debtor whose life is already in a downward spiral. Any...
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    how do i write a 4-minute film outline?

    ok you can count but do you have any advice?
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    how do i write a 4-minute film outline?

    I need to write an outline for a 4-minute film for an application. Im having a hard time finding out the 'true' outline format and how to write it for a 4-minute film. Any help would be highly appreciated. Thanks in advance.
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    outline for 4-minute film?

    Wsup ppl, ive been looking into the USC cinematic program and mentioned in the application process is a 4-minute film outline. What exactly is the proper way of doing a film outline and how do i adjust it to 4 minutes. Thanks in advance.
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    Film Outline

    @jeff thanks bro, i already found these on google but they didnt explain how to make the outline specifically four minutes.
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    Film Outline

    Wsup ppl, ive been looking into the USC cinematic program and mentioned in the application process is a 4-minute film outline. What exactly is the proper way of doing a film outline and how do i adjust it to 4 minutes. Thanks in advance.
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