https://drive.google.com/file/d/0Bw06aLKnYtAoN0JQaF9ZZmtqeFU/view
Does anyone have any tips on improving the screenplay, mainly the dialogue.
P.S. I'm aware that the formatting is a bit off, that's not what I want to know about.
I've recently written a script for a short film and I would like some people to go over it and give some advice.
If you would like to read it say and I'll PM you.
Last year I made a short horror film called 'Sleepy Oaks' and I would like to know if you could check it out and give feedback.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XCg65pheJRc&ab_channel=TumbleweedFilms