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    Screenwriting

    Here are the first few parts of my story a protagonist and his friend(both addicts) living in a lowly apartment with a lowly job,their daily lives.One day the protagonist gets caught with possession by a cop(female lead) forces him into becoming an informant A bond grows during his time as an...
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    Screenwriting

    They are not interested in kicking their addiction they are just having a conversation about it in a lighter tone while they are high
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    Screenwriting

    @directorik The guy you suggested seems a bit impatient and is definitely not open to ideas ...LOL
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    Need help with screenwriting

    It probably is too late but let me put it out there Skip all the introductions and everything The opening scene is directly on the day of the robbery. Ellen patiently watches Lien strike out with ewoud and Lien walks back to the counter disappointed Ellen tries to contact Bruno but he does not...
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    It would be great if i can find some one to partner with on this .Can anyone suggest how I can find one?
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    Screenwriting

    I have started writing it but was not satisfied with what I penned so decided to start afresh
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    Feedback on first 10 pages please.

    Its really good but having only one armed officer in an entire town with a ,for the lack of a better word, use less tin man is a bit far fetched according to me
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    Screenwriting

    Yeah it is a cliche but that is how most of the addicts feel as per my understanding. I am thinking about starting it with a funny banter between the protagonist and his friend where one of them feels that he can easily beat it while the other is cynical about it, although they understand the...
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    Screenwriting

    I would like to begin with a conversation between the protagonist and his friend on how they could easily beat addiction if they tried
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    Screenwriting

    Yeah that is how i would like to show about the effects it has on a person's mind
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    Screenwriting

    Any suggestion as to how to begin ?
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    Screenwriting

    Will this idea work, A love story between a drug addict with anxiety disorder (male) and a cop (female) .How it changed his life and a tragic ending
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