Recent content by RionMcCloud

I liked it so far. Hard to tell what's going on exactly, but I'll be watching for a completed cut. Congratulations on your successful project.

Wow. Seems like a lot to me at this point. Sometimes I struggle with a page at a time. Thank you. I had read something about the Syd Field Paradigm before, just didn't remember until you said it. For me right now I think pacing is the hardest thing to figure out. I'll go based on a page a...

I was just wondering, in general, about how many pages are used for a half hour TV show versus an hour and a half movie? Again, generally speaking.

Well, I hope Will Vincent doesn't mind, but I'm going to post his rewrite. I like it much better than my original, and if people could point out what makes it better maybe it can help me improve as well. Thanks guys. INT. DARK ROOM - NIGHT MIKE lies on the floor, propped against a wall. A...

Short script excerpt posted Well, here's some of the script I have so far. I keep rewriting things, so this scene has about 4 versions on paper. I need to pick one and stick with it, but I keep having different ideas for this, and other, scenes. Int. Dark room. Mike is on the floor, propped...

This stuff goes great with my ideas for my current project. A little creepy/techno/industrial. Love it!!

Thank you for the reception. The dialogue is very weak at this point. I need to find someone to edit and change it for me. The bad thing is I want total control. I change things on the fly while shooting scenes that are written and while my friends don't mind I'm sure it's annoying. heh...

Dark Horizon- Script excerpt added Yeah, I'm writing a script that's like buddy cop film meets horror/comedy. I'll post a portion of script later, but how's this for a tease. An alcoholic, a computer geek, one ghost, a witch, a whole bunch of dead people, and a powerful relic. The winner of...