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The two dated over ten years ago, and the ex was young and irresponsible so Eve did not see the need to tell him. Eve's secrets: * She was sexually abused by her father before he walked out on their family * Her one night stand with her ex and the ensuing consequences * She is stealing...

Awesome insights. I had planned the daughter to die just as the dude just found out. And he can't stop blaming himself for not being there for her all her life. I might want him to transform too, from his criminal behavior

Thanks for your insight. My understanding of this forum is that it is supposed to help writers jump-start their scripts or find better ideas.

Hey, Glad to be here. Now am working on a drama script but halfway through I'm stuck and I need help fleshing out the story and coming up with a powerful ending. I also need to develop stronger tension between the protagonist & antagonist. The synopsis is right here: A young woman - EVE- is...