Recent content by NoxPhoeinx

I have recently finished the first draft a short film that takes place in the near future when physician assisted suicide is legalized for depression. I am more a director and not a screen writer so I know it could use work If you would like to proof read it for me and give some insights, I...

Thanks for the feedback guys! Was there a place you noticed the audio was particularly bad? If so I can go back and see what we could have done differently during production.

Hey guys just released this little short film. Looking for all honest feedback. This forum has already helped me grow so much in my film making. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VH3uVAMls7g https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VH3uVAMls7g

Action comedy just finished the first episode for. The challenge is to try something where I don't have to gather a crew for and just try to make by myself. Future episodes with have more dynamic scenes but the first episode, is mainly setting up the story. Please critique honestly so I can...

Yes. It is all comedy. There is some back story because this is episode II. The pacing bit you mentioned is probably spot on. This is where I need practice most. I have gotten better but can stand to work some more. I was able to cut a minute and a half out of the original edit, but your right...

This forum has helped me grow as a film maker incredibly. So I come again with my latest work for constructive criticism. Be harsh, be kind, but most importantly be honest! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cdvv6c3t3js

Hey guys, I got started on this forum a couple months ago, and the tips and feedback from here completely turned my channel around. Our production value is getting so much better. That being said, we have this new short, and I would love to see what you guys think about it...

Something that might help these specific shots would be adding a vignette around the candle and warmly color correcting it to give the illusion of the fire lighting. As far as the panning shot goes, you have it looking well like late evening. Some standard vignetting and pulling the shadows down...

Tried something new with this one. Of all the productions we have done, this is probably my favorite and best. I'm still nowhere near how good I want to be, but at least now I'm seeing progress...lol I usually struggle with soundtrack and finding interesting shots, not to mention the countless...

Thank you so much! This is all quite very good. Some things I notice in post production, but alot of these pointers were very new. You certainly have a view for quality. Understand that I have only been producing now for about a month, so all of these videos are practice. I haven't quite...

Well, we're definitely getting better, but no where near being able to put what I see in my head into film. Feedback is strongly needed as its the best way to grow, so point out anything you see fit. My particular struggle with this production was the soundtrack. The emotion was missing so...

I did notice that... I did my best in color correction but your right, I certainly should have caught that while filming.

Ok so learning from past mistakes, and from the advice given on my previous videos...here is my third miniature production. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lKsMS_B_qDg Things that I have adamantly focused on improving for the production are... -- Color Temperature of lighting. I have...

Ok, i understand better now....use an optical zoom to fram the shot, but the camera movement will illustrate the depth of the shot more. That is a very good tip. Thank you, what might you do about vertical shots, or places a dolly may not reach (woods, off road)?

Thanks for the feedback! The edit was a little rough, but rather than go back and fix the stuff I figured I will just take the practice into my new projects. My equipment is a Sony HDR SR12, with a shotgun mic. For audio, I mainly capture on a Tascam DR-08. I am saving up for a better camera...