Good point. Me too. I cut the shots up in post for pacing reasons, but I wish I would have gotten the moment right in one shot in production. Thanks for watching!
I’ve been posting these “mini-films” on here and getting some good feedback. I thought I’d post this one too and see if there are any thoughts. To me, these are films which aren’t quite substantial enough to be considered short films, but still aim to tell a mini story.
What do you think of...
Sheesh!!! That sounds crazy. Gonna check it out soon. And nah man, leave it up! This thread doesn’t have to be all about me. I’m no narcissist. Spread the love!
Thanks man. Appreciate the feedback. This one was a one man band production. Maybe one day I’ll at least find someone to press record for me and then we’ll have some real cinema on our hands 😆 Thanks for watching and commenting again! Hope to see some of your work too!
I received a lot of good feedback on the mini film I posted a few days ago, so I thought I’d post this new one too. Once again I ask… did I succeed in telling a story within the short runtime? Any other thoughts?
I like the turn toward social commentary that this thread took. If this post becomes the catalyst for police reform in America, I’m running for president
Thanks for the feedback! Good criticism. The idea was that she twisted or broke her ankle while running and had to stop... but we needed more than a barely audible sound effect to communicate that :lol: I'm fairly happy with the film for what it is - a little run and gun film shot in an hour -...
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