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Ok but why is Sam overreacting? She knows about Jaime's condition, his mental state, so why is she acting in a way as to make him feel threatened? She doesn't seem to be freaking out and hysterical but instead it's like she's lecturing him after he just went through a traumatic experience.

Just a couple of quick thoughts. It seems as though Denise knows about Kevin's condition, so why is he alone in the beginning? Also dementia from what I understand affects short-term memory, how is it then that Kevin can remember so much about his parents, his upbringing and other things and yet...

I don't understand Sam's reaction when Jaime tells her the man tried to kill him. It seems as though she is chastising him for what he did yet it seemed as though his life was seriously threatened and it was either shoot the intruder or be killed himself. Unless I missed a part where it is shown...

Thanks for the input. I have already purchased a program called Fade In from the Apple App Store. As to the script itself, it started off as a movie and then I got to the point where I didn't know where to go and thought about making a sitcom on the premise of a group of friends who meet once a...

This is a first draft of my first ever screenplay. It is a short film. I know that I still have a lot to learn about style and formatting. Right now I am just looking for feedback on the actual plot and characters of my film...