Recent content by Loomis

After some thought, I've come to see the irony in the combination of this statement and the links provided, including mine.

I've been watching the miniseries version of Scenes from a Marriage. It has some of the best use of close-ups you will ever see.

"While there are only five or ten generic Hollywood movies, there is no one kind of independent film. They come in as many flavors, sizes, and shapes as there are artists. That's why it is easier to say what independent films are not than what they are. I can tell you some things they aren't...

Once the creators set an end date, the show was amazing.

Did this clerk work at a Best Western by any chance? The jersey scene is a thinker. It would take, as you mention in the script, a bit of time to take off the shirt, particularly if she's hefty, which I'm projecting. Wouldn't this scene draw some interest? Does it take place in an alley or is...

How a show that good got put on the CW I'll never know. .... The Last Temptation of Christ - 9/10 - Scorsese's spiritual poem. Beautiful. Down by Law - 8/10 - Jarmusch's take on the buddy flick and a spiritual yarn in its own right. Robby Müller shows, yet again, his mastery of black and...

Nice work, Jeff. If you don't mind revealing, how did you manage the effects during the beginning and end sequences? They fit the mood perfectly.

From the The Classification and Rating Administration (CARA) rulebook: The withdraw period is ninety days, but is being waived due to the promotion efforts mentioned in the article CF linked to.

Yep, I get you now. EXT. ALLEYWAY - CONTINUOUS should have been EXT. CITY SQUARE - CONTINUOUS. That was a big misstep. Thanks for picking up on it. I'm with you on your other points, too. They'll be in the forefront as I tinker with it.

Thanks SciFi. This was an experiment in writing an action heavy sequence. That information may have been helpful. I may be misreading your comment, but I mention Gabrielle stumbling out of the alley: Her fingers meet the grip of the .38. She lets her wits return before standing and stumbling...

Google and I haven't been simpatico lately...Hopefully this works. http://www.mediafire.com/?3hmmtf1hhl2m831

Hope you enjoy it. Feel free to destroy. Rye Bread

Even a blind hog finds an acorn now and then.

The note on rhythm, not page numbers, running your story was nice.

Here's a good set of links from Robert McKee's site: http://mckeestory.com/?page_id=26