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Thanks for the feedback kinglis :-) Yes I quite liked Flatmates - Popcorn as well! :-) Do you think you preferred that one because of the different comedy style, or would it be hard to put into words? :-)

Hi All, Sixth attempt at the short comedy "Flatmates", longer piece with several scenes. Feedback would be helpful. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DhwwLCky6oY Jonny

I'm certainly no expert, just trying to improve a little each time. So thanks for the feedback, much appreciated! :-)

Hi All, Fifth attempt at the short comedy "Flatmates", quick, silly, short. Any feedback is welcome! :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IQPIC9c0ZsM Jonny

Thanks :-) Still working on making things better, I suspect that will never change :-)

You're right of course and I wouldn't be surprised if many people wouldn't bother! :o)

Thanks Murdock! :)

Hi All, Fourth attempt at the short comedy "Flatmates", exploring the different views on how people treat their friends. Let me know what you think, any comments are appreciated :-) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WFOcYfd28SI Thanks, Jonny

Hi All, Third attempt at the short comedy "Flatmates", shot this one over Christmas last year. Let me know what you think :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GnA1Y46V43M Thanks, Jonny :)

Thanks so much for watching and taking the time to comment, certainly lots to think about and try out. Much appreciated! :-) Onto the next attempt! Thanks, Jonny

OK so a bigger ending.. Interesting. I'll give it some thought.. Thanks! :cool:

Hi All, This is my second comedy attempt for 'Flatmates'. I expanded on the characters, adjusted the shots, lighting and tried a slightly different writing style. The "book" was created as a prop by Cathy who also plays "Jill" in the short. Please let me know what you think even if it's "OK"...

I believe this was the first acting that the guy did (Leon Grey) in that piece! Shot on a DSLR (Canon Rebel), the sound went into a DVX100 along side. I think this may have been why the audio isn't great though, as I believe it's 12-bit which is probably fine if you have an audio person, but...

Thanks for the comments again :-) They are most welcome and allow me to look into making these pieces better. I'll have a think about the audio I can't think at present what the issue could be, but I'll start doing some experiments. I'll let Cathy know! :-) Any other comments are more than...

Thanks so much for the replies so far, it really us much appreciated. I've been trying to get some feedback on this for a while. It's all learning to me, so please do comment good or bad, it really is helpful! Will give the script some thought, and look into the sound... Any other comments are...