I too just watched Trespass. Oh my giddy Aunt! A veritable scream-fest! I didn't think that even Nicolas Cage carried this one off too well either. He obviously only gave a half-hearted performance after wanting to swap roles to the kidnapper half way through shooting!
Circularly thin plot...
Yeah - you're probably right... but I just thought it might have an amusement factor particulalrly if each scene is constructed such that there is a minor cliff-hanger or expectation. That would be the skill required in writing the script.... the element of direction (from afar) by me would be...
I had a wild idea when I was in bed last night and it has been playing itself out today. I just want to get some views on whether it has legs.
Short Movie.
Write a storyline, create the character or character(s), wirte the script, break it up into scenes.
Offer the scenes to amateur movie...