The revision is a lot stronger and makes it a lot easier to fully take in what is going on and not have to wonder about it, so the reader/viewer can focus on the characters' attitudes towards each other. I feel like they have more depth now as well. I dig this a lot.
Really enjoyed this! I noticed how well the audio was recorded, nice and crisp, really helped make it as scary as it was and build tension. I don't wanna give away the ending to anyone who's reading this before watching but the shots in the mirror made my friend and I lurch out of our seats...