Recent content by Hajiman

That's kind of the point, the "villain" has it wrong, hence why the other boy says "I'm nothing like you". The interaction with the boy shows the villain just how wrong he has gotten his life, which prompts him to turn against his boss. But you are right, the initial response to "run to the...

Thanks for the comment, The point about the characters response is very true, its quite a bit plothole, but I do feel that the pacing is ok, I think that if it was any faster it wouldnt allow for any tension to build :)

Yep those are all fair points, I tried to give the short a glow to make it dreamlike and I agree it doesnt really work with the tone. I tried to grab the audiences attention with the gunshot, and not making it clear who he shot til the end. Thank you for giving me feedback on my shorts, I have...

Very true, I was simply explaining why I couldn't change the aperture on the shots. Thanks for the advice though :)

Well I'm planning on making a webseries with a few friends, the only experience I have is the experience I've gained from making films, I don't plan on going to film school. It would be nice to collaborate with others but I think my only real skill is in writing, the only reason I shoot my own...

haha I hope not, I haven't even had one hit yet :P

Thanks for watching it, those are all valid points, I only have a sony handycam and a zoom h2n recorder so my production is pretty poor, and fair point about the ending, I forgot to get a shot of him leaving his gun behind before he left as the shoot was rushed. The point about the kids dressed...

Wow the cinematography really was impressive, some of the acting was a little off but I think thats quite a big problem for a lot of us on this forum, so I try to look past the acting. Nice twist at the end too. Great job

This is very impressive for someone your age, you should be proud. The acting does throw me off a bit as it is pretty bad, and some of the writing is quite boring at points and could be a bit livelier. A clever premise though Well done

Still no comments? Have I done something wrong? :P

I've only been on this forum for a day and I can already say it is way better than any other forums like it out there, people here are very engaging, welcoming and polite :)

Haha! This was cool, really funny. I didn't see any problem with the colour correction at all really, but there were a few sound distortions when the sunglasses guys were shouting. Nice job :)

I make short films on youtube, you can watch them on my channel here: http://www.youtube.com/user/xHajimanx My first film was made a year ago and I think I have improved a great deal since then, and my films have taken on a much darker, dramatic tone than the silly tarantino rip offs I used to...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YVOsNGYEQ_g A kid is offered a life changing amount of money. But what is he prepared to do for it?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cx0985PzZu4 The story of a boy who witnesses a crime, and the killer behind it