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    Requesting Feedback for a Script - Vampire (30 Pages So Far)

    Hello everybody, I'm diligently working on a script for a weird idea that came to mind a couple weeks back; I normally handle, or attempt to handle, fairly straightforward and serious horror and sci-fi ideas, but this script has elements of a coming-of-age story mixed with a few low-key (VERY...
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    Feedback on Script - Island (Horror) (31 Pages So Far)

    Thank you so much for the feedback, guys!! mad_hatter, thanks for letting know about the character mix-ups on page 6-7. I can't believe I overlooked that as I was writing that scene. Just letting you know that the only three characters interacting in that scene are Nick, Alex, and Nina, and...
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    Feedback on Script - Island (Horror) (31 Pages So Far)

    Hello, guys, So I have taken my first stab at writing a horror script and, as stated above, written about 31 pages and I have expanded on the story to some extent and have tried to the best of my ability to establish some initial scares. Thing is, I am kind of new to this script thing, so in...
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    Writing a Screenplay - Need Some Feedback

    Hello, Everyone, I'm in the works of developing a new dystopian sci fi screenplay and am about 51 pages through with the story, and I would say in the beginning of my second act. The script is titled Souls of the Lost, and the following is the logline: The story of three individuals living...
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