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how often should i use the terms "we see" or "we hear"? is it still alright to put them in a screenplay?

It's easier to understand it more after reading the youtube description. I thought it wasreally good. I really liked the first shot.

A knowledge of screenwriting would be good aswel :D

I liked it. The first half better than the second half though. :yes: (well for me anyway lol) I think the girl could've said the last lines better though. Like, with more emotion.

But i live in New Zealand.... I'll have to Peter Jackson my way to America. :cool:

this should be stickied

go to a youtube channel called BlackBoxTV

I've got about 7 different shots. Really short, quick ones. (Set out as shooting script btw) Should i just use 7 "cut to's" or a "sequence of shots" numbered 1-7 or something?

lol thanks. Lol it gave you goosebumps? That's pretty cool that something I did affected you that way :)

Thanks! That was some really constructive feedback. I'll keep all of that in mind:cool:

This was a short I decided to write a few months back. Could any of you comment on any improvements i can make in my writing? (set out as a spec script). Thanks! Logline: A lonely individual lets his inner emotion get the best of him. http://www.scribd.com/doc/44962499/Monaxia