Recent content by Astranth1012

I think it would be nice if you could use your interest in aerospace engineering in the story :) Like... he's one of the men in Houston during the first landing on the moon, so he drives from his country home through rural Texas to see the campus one more time before going into a retirement...

Hi :D I just joined too!

directorik and Will Vincent already mentioned storyboard quick, which was what I was going to recommend to you, TrueImage. And Will Write For Latte, I think that the 'je ne sais quoi' that you mentioned is very important but I disagree with you about its origin: I've found that doing the...

My favorite screenwriters have consistently portrayed the larger writer's room to me as the place to go for shallow plots and Michael-Bay-explosions type films. To get a screenplay with more substance, pair up with one or two writers who mesh well with your genre and your methodology. Or fly...

What about Coercion? The male theif is unwilling to give up his counterpart and the goods, so he must be coerced into betraying them by getting beaten up...

I agree with Brooksy. I remember when I was just starting my first few shorts and I needed to beg friends to do me favors and spare their time in order to gather up a few actors; the very best thing you can do is to just sit down over coffee and talk your way through the script. Don't ask them...

Wow... that is flat-out amazing! Congratulations! The atmosphere is probably what stood out the most to me: it's so fitting :)