View Full Version : noir style challenge short


jpw
11-15-2005, 03:36 PM
On the website filmfights.com they do themed challenges ever few weeks. This weeks is to film noir, and was to be titled " the suitcase ". Other requirments, no clear face shots, must be b&w and no direct character to character dialogue. Given the conditions, this is what I came up with. I'm sure someone will point out that the VO is hard to hear, which it could be a little better. As usual looking for constructive criticism and feedback, always trying to get better.

The Suitcase 5:05 quicktime http://www.media-garden.org/fin/noirff.mov

cinevid
11-16-2005, 02:13 AM
This was fun to watch however, it was such a bummer not to see an explosion at the end.

Lilith
11-23-2005, 10:20 AM
Just did a workshop a couple of weeks ago where the format was noir styled shooting. Nicely done. :)