www.deceptionfilms.com and there is a link to it on the main page. I suggest you right click and hit 'save as', it's a 50mb movie.

It's roughly 12 minutes long, and just wanted to get some outside opinions.



Thanks!

Pretty good d/l speed. Get back with you l8r. ;)

any thought?

I thought it was a fun send up...poor guy!

Well, we're going to be kicking out the final version soon.

Thanks!


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D'OH! Sorry, I downloaded it, watched it once, waited watched it again then promptly forgot to post my thoughts. Sorry DA.

First off, it needs more cowbell. If you're going to carry out the documentary feel then you need to do it all the way. The other actors in the waiting room should have acknowledged the camera's entrance. You could have had one of them object, or all three of them balk at signing the agreement to be filmed for no money form. Have your protagonist get into an argument with one of them. That would have added more punch to that scene. But for me, the whole thing needs punching up.

I enjoyed that actor quite a bit. Kind of a smart, edgy, more grown up Napoleon Dynamite.

I enjoyed it, but it needed more kick.