wilbur
10-05-2005, 12:54 PM
I'm new here, so go easy on me please. Myself and a friend made this when we were bored one day and I want to see what you guys think of it.
Please tell em what you think I should do to improve my work. Thanks!
To watch the vid go here: http://media.putfile.com/paperairplane/320
EDIT: new link added. sorry for the broken one.
Miguel Russo
10-06-2005, 05:08 PM
Your link isn't working for me.
wilbur
10-06-2005, 05:27 PM
Fixed it, sorry for the inconvenience.
John@Bophe
10-06-2005, 05:27 PM
Me either. The page cannot be displayed
Miguel Russo
10-06-2005, 05:54 PM
Pretty funny. Not bad for something you just whipped up when you were bored. The hand work in the beginning looked really good, but a little to quick in some spots. The whole thing fit great with the music. Despite the title, I had no idea it was going to be a comedy until I saw that wide open mouth. From that point on the camera work didn't seem the same, but I liked how you followed the plane, the whole falling to the knees thing too. I got a laugh out of it, definately.
wilbur
10-06-2005, 06:32 PM
Me either. The page cannot be displayed
Should work fine now.
Thanks Miguel!
