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View Full Version : Point Sublime short bottomunion 10-08-2004, 04:46 AM Here's a short film I shot while on vacation. I'm new to Indietalk so hopefully everything will work out fine. http://www.bottomunion.com/WesltessPHOTO/PointSublime.html Thanks Erik Feedback is always appreciated www.bottomunion.com learnfilmonline 10-08-2004, 05:12 AM Ha Ha, that was funny, but why did you stay on that first shot so long. :lol: bottomunion 10-08-2004, 05:21 AM I wanted to exaggerate the hike, build up anticipation for the punchline...get you thinking, "what is going on? why am I watching this guy hike this rim? Is something going to happen?" Get the viewer inside his/her head, so the joke has a better effect. It is possible I stayed too long on that shot, and maybe I could cut it down, I don't know... But thanks for the reply, glad you enjoyed it. Erik www.bottomunion.com Zensteve 10-08-2004, 10:49 PM Funny setup, funny gag... I think both halves could have been shorter, though. :) I never saw that gag coming, btw. Nice execution. Just needed to be a bit more concise. :lol: NicklausLouis 10-11-2004, 01:04 PM I thought the opening static shot was great. I was getting ready for a serious drama, but then the punchline really paid off! I do however think the joke was bit too long (what did that dude drink???), but it didn't take away from the initial feeling of funniness. Poke King Goldfish 10-12-2004, 02:27 AM Gave me a chuckle. Im sure there was some sort of creative purpose to this whole film. Made me laugh anyways. King Goldfish 10-12-2004, 02:29 AM Funny setup, funny gag... I think both halves could have been shorter, though. :) I never saw that gag coming, btw. Nice execution. Just needed to be a bit more concise. :lol: I think that was part of the humor... him pissing for 90 seconds off of a mile high cliff. Ooopss.. did I give it away? My bad. :P King Goldfish 10-20-2004, 12:11 AM I think watching this for a third time just made it funnier. My friend had to wipe a tear from his eye.. big buildup then anyways, funnys hit. I wish it could go farther.. Maybe someone at the bottom of the canyon. ;) bottomunion 10-20-2004, 05:49 PM King Goldfish.... Glad to hear someone likes the film as much as me. I've watched it a hundred times and I still think the thing is pretty funny...my brother drank tons of water, and it came out in three installments...which I think made it more funny. It's 100% real... Thanks for the feedback NicklausLouis 10-20-2004, 06:30 PM So that's real? I thought that one of the problems was it looked to fake. Tell your bro he pees like a fake! Poke |
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