Hello, this is my first post on here. Over easter I shot as part of my studies my first short film in which I acted as Writer/Director. At the moment the short isnt completely edited and will take a little work to get finished. I would appreciate any feedback you could give about what you would do. I will say though, ignore the sound and video quality at the moment. This is a low res rough copy made from the Avid proxy files.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EjLNgVm4NGA
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EjLNgVm4NGA