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watch Vindictive Ground - Opening of a horror film. [MUST SEE!]

A butter knife as a murder weapon seems odd in context. Also, the sword fighting was awfully unbelievable and the $20 stainless steel swords with plastic hilts did not help.
 
Who the heck is Harry Cross and why the heck do we have to see his name a half a dozen times?

Unless you're Steven Spielberg, all that stuff belongs on the back end.
 
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@ 1:20 subject's left / screen right face is blown out.
@ 1:30 more over exposed blow outs
@ 1:42 Mom's face is sunlit
@ 1:44 Mom's face is in the shadow
@ 1:46 Mom's back in the sun
@ 1:49 change of view - but at least Mom's still in the sun, although now inconsistent with the shot @ 1:44
@ 3:20 that wig just... fell outta the sky and landed on her head, didn't it?
@ 3:21 the taller male turns with an overhand stab...
@ 3:22 ... that lands perpendicular into the shorter child's thigh. Yeah.
@ 3:49 she gets up from the ground revealing her bloody mangled thigh is magically better and the dress clean and repaired! Hoooraaaaayyyy!!!! Lookit that girl run!!!
@ 3:51 I'm not quite sure what overhand stabbing position that butter knife is in now.
@ 3:59 just how much blood is going to squirt out a guy's back shoulder blade & muscle, THROUGH at least two layers of clothing, from a butter knife stabbing?
@ 4:14 I advise against shooting a back lit subject.

And put the minute of credits at the end of a three minute short.
 
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