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watch Attic (Horror Short)

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fernando97echeverria

Hey everyone, this is an incomplete short I unearthed this year. It was (nearly) done in 2010 when I was 11 after watching “Paranormal Activity” and subsequently made me go home and immediately make this (no joke, I made it that night with my dad’s 7D) but an hour into production the camera died, my weekend was booked and I forgot about it. So I edited the footage and made what I could. I don’t care for the incomplete storyline, but I’m a little humbled by my cinematography. Any feedback would be great, thanks!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jrWMWxovKI4
 
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I've never seen the Paranormal movies. Is this a recreation of one of the scenes, or an original clip inspired by the film?

Those Jacob's ladders are scary as all getup, btw.
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You've strung your shots together pretty well. Effective creepy ending.

Can't see our hero in some of the shots. Keep lighting in mind, on every shot.

You gonna continue this? :cool:
 
Wait, you made that when you were 11? Man that's great... I liked the feel of it and the shots were really good, especially the one that follows the string/puller for the stairs. The lighting could had been better, but with no preparation as you said, it's a great short.
 
Thanks everyone for the feedback. I'm a little picky about which of my shorts I post, so I upload really old ones only most of the time. I'll be updating my channel more however.

Zensteve said:
Is this a recreation of one of the scenes, or an original clip inspired by the film?
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Nah, only reference I pulled off was the low rumble. Also, when you do see Paranormal, just watch the first one. Kinda like just watching the first two Godfather films.

Jeff Troiano said:
Looking at your avatar, that's a heck of a beard for a 13 year old, I'm jealous! :)
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Haha, I wish that was me ;)

joey1320 said:
...especially the one that follows the string/puller for the stairs.
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Thanks man, it was probably the hardest shot. I did the "fold up the front tripod foot and let the tripod down gently" trick :cool:
 
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