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stevefranco
03-17-2004, 08:40 AM
Hello,

I figured I'd also post these spec concepts we shot for practice. Any and all feedback is appreciated. :)

Lips 2 Lips (http://www.fusionarena.com/films/Lips2Lips)

Diamond Ad (http://www.fusionarena.com/diamond)

Shot Renegade
03-17-2004, 01:56 PM
Lips 2 Lips ad = 7
Diamond Ad = 8

Diamond Ad was very funny, and nicely lit!
You crossed the 180 framing line though which was a bit confusing...

Lips 2 Lips ad started well, had some nicely frame shots
but it seemed to drag in the middle.

All very radical!

Keep up the good work!!! =D>

stevefranco
03-18-2004, 02:57 PM
Thanks for the comments. Yeah, that crossing of the 180 line was unfortunately unavoidable as it was covering up a few problems we had getting all the coverage we needed to make the ad look the way we wanted it to. Poor planning on our part.

Pink Guy
03-18-2004, 10:59 PM
Both ads were funny.

Just curious, the Lips [2] Lips ad, was that shown on television?

Poke

stevefranco
03-19-2004, 07:57 AM
No, Lips 2 Lips is an online only thing. We just shot it for practice since Lips 2 Lips is a brand name we came up with.

Pink Guy
03-20-2004, 02:32 PM
Okay, I was wondering how it played on TV with such a suggestive sexual premise.

Poke

stevefranco
03-22-2004, 08:01 AM
You're right the sexual premise would keep it off the airwaves here in the states, you never know though these days. Tt would probably be tame by european commercial standards.