watch My 2 Latest Shorts *Feedback very welcome!*

Ok I just upgraded my equipment a bit. I am no longer working with a 100 dollar studio lol. I am still working on the lighting also on color correction. I listened to the feedback you all left last time and it helped a lot! I would appreciate feedback and thank you all for watching

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0AVpWsIWqXI

and

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j5gGQ4BvgSk

First short - lighting wasn't too bad, neither was the colour correction. The framing was a little too predictable for the first shot. I knew straight off the bat that a guy was going to come from the right hand side of the screen and fill that 'obvious' gap that your camera shot was giving. I'd try and be a little more inventive - try a pan, cut or place the camera in a more subtle way. Also, the editing wasn't great. You've gone for jump cuts but it definitely doesn't work well with the final two shots as it is filmed to be continuous (I presume this because your actor asked a question) and yet the editing doesn't flow as the guy in red has hands on the table in one shot and on his legs in the next.

Second video was much better with some good shots and nice editing.

Hated the 1st one started well, but lighting isn't great, girl really irritated me too

Enjoyed the 2nd one purely for it's stupidity.