watch Parasitic - Psychological Short Film

Hello and Welcome

I have a few criticisms. The sound could have been better in terms of voice quality, it seemed to be overridden by the ambient/background music. Also the relationship between the protagonist and his friend was forced, there wasn't a clear reason for why they were meeting up, and story-wise there was no motive for why he took the shortcut. Speaking of which the walking took up way too much time, that could be edited more. Also I don't understand why there was a noose in the middle of the woods. Who put it there? Very weird flick, but I found it kind of entertaining. Keep at it, I hope you think about story first going forward. Good luck guys

Hi Jrsmithson,
I totally agree with the matter of sound, however, that's the best I could have gotten it to taking everything into consideration. Hmm, interesting point which I didn't think of, I will have to have that in mind for the next project.
Thank you for the criticism, we always appreciate it