watch SCENE TEST - SWIFT (Before and after)

Ok, here it goes.
We entered a 48hr film contest, and the first day went by without even turning on the camera (logistics ). The second day, we started really late, and shooting something that we wouldn't even use. Finally we entered with something shot, edited and uploaded (20 min upload for a 2 minute video ) in four hours.

Anyhow, I did not ended well, but I re-edited the first scene, which turned from this:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bm9CZkqKx-I

into this...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PFwkvEZwD10


I think it's better... Might re-edit the whole thing.


Side by side comparison

Anyhow, about the color correction... I still need to get the hang of it. Looks really hipster-ish. Also, poorly lit.

It definitely looks better.

Editing was very good.

Hopefully we weren't suppose to read what he was typing into facebook. Because it was unreadable in both versions.

Nice job.

It was important to read what he typed... Somehow I can see it on the footage before uploading, but youtube screwed up the upload. Really compressed...
Luckily, we subtitled the whole thing before uploading for the contest.

Ok, color grade is much better now. I was not using the LUT for CineStyle, so I was not using the DR that it has to offer.

SBS comparison here.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FjGzEp2vAcM