watch New student film - Pictures of you (Actually uploaded this time)

Pictures of you - What do you do when you lose everything (Student Film)

Hey guys, i made this post before but removed it because the video didn't upload properly but now it's on youtube.

This is my second film made on a shoe string budget with a canon 550D. Please rate and comment and let me know what you think. Any constructive criticism is welcome

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y1fnSnfVPwQ&feature=channel_video_title

Well, there were some good shots here and there. Especially the outside daytime shots. However, I would have recommended a tripod, to much shakeycam for my taste. Lighting for indoor scenes needed a little bit more finessing.

The two biggest things that stuck out though, was that number one, the step brother came across more as a jealous lover than a concerned sibling. It was somewhat creepy.

Also, the soundtrack selection kind of overpowered the story a bit. Especially since it was all copyright material. It would have been nice to have some score music, or some fresh non protected material.

Just my two cents...

Thanks for your comment. We were going for a sense of realism with the shakey cam but i understand it's not something that everyone is a fan of

That's interesting, i see what you mean on this account and it could be perceived that way.

Next time i'll try get a local musician to do the score. We used a lot of music in only a 10minute film and i guess we could have removed some of it.