Here's my newest film, titled "Perdition." It tells the story of one soldier's worst fear: dying alone.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o2CcxJFIsbo
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o2CcxJFIsbo
-
READ BEFORE POSTING!
- If posting a video, please post HERE, unless it is a video as part of an advertisement and then post it in this section.
- If replying to threads please remember this is the Promotion area and the person posting may not be open to feedback.
watch PERDITION
- Thread starter MinutemenPro
- Start date
Nice idea. Great color and believable locations.
My comments, take 'em with a grain of salt...
Use a tripod. AND a level. Composition could be better, remember the rule of three(s). No one (ever) talks like that -- great dialogue is tricky. Change some of the costuming to fit the era better.
You did good, I watched the whole thing too, was not bored. Curious where you would let the story go to.
My comments, take 'em with a grain of salt...
Use a tripod. AND a level. Composition could be better, remember the rule of three(s). No one (ever) talks like that -- great dialogue is tricky. Change some of the costuming to fit the era better.
You did good, I watched the whole thing too, was not bored. Curious where you would let the story go to.
Thanks for your reply! This is really only my third film that I've taken the time to plan out and edit, etc. This took about 6 hours total to shoot and edit, so I think it went pretty well, and as usual was a learning experience! Again, thank you for the advice! It is always appreciated