Didn't do anything for me.
There were also some technical problems. Because you didn't use any fill or background lighting, your shots were flat, and your subject, who was wearing a dark shirt, disappeared into the darkness. I suggest you spend some time learning about lighting.
Also, since all of the dialogue was VO, I would have liked a better recording. Your audio contained a lot of popping plosive sounds, and this just calls attention to the fact that it's recorded, and detracts from any illusion of naturalism.
You let the music do all of your heavy lifting, to convey your atmosphere of mystery and creepiness, but the film itself has none of this. And for my taste, a thin Dan Brown homage is not a good place to start with a story.
Funny that you have a little note in the comments telling people to read the description for an explanation (which isn't even there), but any film which doesn't convey the basic info that a viewer needs to understand or care about it fails to do its job.
Answer -- or at least hint at -- basic questions: Who, What, Where, Why? Otherwise you haven't given us reason to care. And introducing a gun at the end does not function as shorthand for actual conflict.
I wish you the best in honing your craft. Cheers.
