As the guy who edited this, I'll chime in: with a max running time of 7 minutes, a lot of things were compressed (like the character cards) or completely dropped (like a lot of the footage which would have established who each character was) in favor of trying to tell a complete story for Jimmy. I myself loved the talking heads and could've filled the whole running time with nothing but that, excluding the whole competition part :v
With regards to the camera-shaking, ketchup was the DoP and I think most of it is genuine. We went without a steadicam rig for the sake of time.
The only other thing I'd mention is that even though you made a point of certain comedic traits they have in their Guy-Ritchie-esque introduction shots, you didn't really touch on them that much with the actual characters. They just seemed a bit too subtle in their acting, but perhaps you should have done some little things to further focus on their different lifestyles - like having the guy who played a lot of Minecraft playing on his phone throughout the interview, or the "hothead of the year guy" perhaps telling a story about how he inspires people as opposed to what inspired him.
