This would probably have been more appropriate for 'Experimental' or 'Other' than the 'Narrative' forum, seeing as it's just a crane test.
Saying that, it wasn't bad! I'll assume you're a low budget independent, so that kind of quality is expected for that kind of price - the shakiness can be edited out in post-production, especially when there's so little like in what you showed. After Effects does that pretty well by stretching the image slightly (so you may want to film slightly zoomed out) and then rotating the image frame by frame to keep the image steady.
Of course, it's always better to try and make it actually steadier as well, but post-production can still help with ironing out the little problems.