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Realalien - What part of the "Golden Fields" production were you involved in?

-craig

I wrote, produced and Directed the film plus editing. It's 85 min long shot on super 16 and was shot in Canada and LA with a budget of $70,000 US. I also have a short which was show at sundance about 2 years ago called Into Darkness shot on 35 mm. B&W
Barry Atkinson

It could just be me, but I'm very confused as to what this film is about. I think some dialogue could've really help clear up what you're trying to present. The generic titles ("A New Beginning", etc) don't really tell me anything, either. The film looks like it could be interesting, but the trailer is really confusing.

- Mike.

Mike I agree, I'm working on a new trailer as we speak. thanks for the input though.

The trailer was put together nicely and displayed a wide range of emotions but i have to agree with mike (aka spite)
It would be great if you had a bit of dialog to better discribe what the movie was about..
Example:Spoken:"Filmmaker john Doe brings to you an epic drama about friendship companioins etc. etc. and tell a bit about the film as the trailer progresses"
I think that would have been great..

The Super 16 looks great. It really is golden. I agree that the trailer could use some narration. But I wouldn't go overboard. It has a sort of "Hallmark Hall of Fame"-look. I think you are using that to good advantage.

Thanks guys for the ideas! :)